Are
>we aware of some of them?
wyrzucilbym some
I ten drugi paragraf przydaloby sie zaczac jakims transistion (np. To begin with, on the one hand, etc.)
For example, expansion of different ways of transport
>lets people translocate faster. What is more, passing information
>became easier.
the expansion
has become
Nowadays, if we want to deliver a message to someone we
>can send an SMS or make a phone call.
przecinek po someone
technological
>development supplies entertainment for us.
zamiast powtarzac - technological advancement
TO us (i lepiej zdaje sie brziec provides niz supplies, ale jesli sie uprzec:)
Watching DVD movies,
>playing computer games or surfing the Internet are a way to relax and
>calm for the majority of people.
are WAYS
>On the other hand, technological development makes people isolate from
>each other, they spend time alone in their homes, communicate with
dalbym isolates people from ONE ANOTHER (bez makes). Nastepnie rozbic to na dwa zdania - kropka po other.
Some new types of biological or chemical weapons
>can be discovered and used. Another problem is felling forests to get
>some space for factories and highways.
znow to samo. wywalic some.
Certain/various albo po prostu New types
felling forests - deforestation
deforestation in order to acquire land/space for...
It is a serious environmental
>problem, because a lot of animals and plants are threatened and our
>climate is getting warmer.
a lot of - many
przed because nie stawiamy przecinka.
climate is BECOMING warmer (and warmer).
I think that bulk of the population wants further
>progress because they would like to be happy, pleasant and live
>comfortably.
THE bulk
happy, PLEASED, and to live comfortably.