Może ktoś mi spr ???:(

Last winter in February on my holiday I was in Zakopane with my class. On friday when we drove there, my friends and I didn`t listen to our teacher and we went to mountains. It was very cold. At first we decided to ski, but Tomwas running and was shouting. Then we were trying to stop him because we knew that was dangerous. He didn`t stop. To our horror suddenly big avalanche covered him, we were in a shock. Immediately my friends were trying to dig him up. Maggie and I ran to our teacher who called for help. My fiends dog Tom`s up but he was in horrible condition. He had broken his arm and was freezing. Luckily help arrived fast. They took him to the hospital. We went to tourist`s shelter. The next morning the guardian tought us a lesson. In the end Tom came back to us. I think that he`ll never do something stupid like that and we`ll never go somewhere without guardian. We were very happy when we went to home.

w napisaniu pomogła mi kolezanka z internetu ale wole sie upewnic

please!!!:)

>w napisaniu pomogła mi kolezanka z internetu ale wole sie upewnic

A to bardzo dziwne, bo identyczne wypracowanie znajduje się na stronie http://www.sciaga.pl/tekst/31572-32-my_danger_story Jak można tak perfidnie kłamać? Mam nadzieję, że nauczycielka Cię załatwi tak, że dostaniesz 1.