prosze o sprawdzenie

prosze, sprawdzcie moja prace domowa i poprawcie bledy (bo pewnie ich troche tam jest), to ma byc opis ulubionego miejsca. z gory dzieki.

Moers is a small town in central Germany under Koln.
I wentthere only once, becaouse i visited my grandma.

The town is very quiet and isn't busy like other cities
in this country. The weather is very stable, sun
always shines there and winters are warm but first of
all people there are very friendly and happy.

In Moers is small park where lives white like snow swans
and ducks ducks which i liked feeding when they comes
to me and my grandma. I'll not forget this place ever.

I spent there gold time and if you want to rest of noisy
world you should go on holiday there.

PS.
prosze o jaknajszybsze sprawdzenie, poniewaz to jest juz na jutro :)

Moers is a small town in central Germany 'under' (to znaczy gdzie - podziemne miasto) Koln.
I went there only once, becAUSE (Lepsze slowo to 'to visit') I (I piszemy duza litera - to nie sms) visited my grandma.
The town is very quiet and isn't busy like other cities
in 'this' country. The weather is very stable, sun
always shines there and winters are warm but first of
all people there are very friendly and happy. (First of all, i piszesz to na koncu - zmien kolejnosc idei)
In Moers THERE is A small park where 'lives'(nie wlasciwe miejsce) 'white like snow' swans and ducks LIVE. Ducks which I liked feeding when they 'comes' (nie comes, a 'came' to me and my grandma. I'll not forget this place ever.

>I spent there gold time and if you want to rest of noisy world you should go on holiday there.