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Advantages and disadvantagen of mobile phones

Mobile phone is invention twentieth century, which revolute telephones sphere. It’s wireless phone, which changes for couple of years since begin of mobile phones. Not only in appearance (it’s smaller), but in employ too.

Firstly who has a mobile phone can be always keep in touch all time, because this phones are wireless. When we have a situation, when somebody needs to be helped, we can ring. When we forget something we can send a short message. The newest mobile phones serves not only for ringing but it has access to internet, it takes photos etc.

In contrast it’s not cultured when in public place telephone is ringing. It’s expensive to keep it. The mobile phones can be dangerous, when we are driving and talking by phone at the same moment. When we are talking of phone is emitting radiation, so it’s menace to live.

In conclusion, I want to express oneself about mobile phones. I think that people need it, but within limits. We shouldn’t answer a telephone in public places, and when we are talking with somebody. But it’s need in pressing situations or when somebody needs to be helped.


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Mobile phone is AN invention OF THE twentieth century, which 'revolute'? telephones sphere. It's THE wireless phone, which HAS changeD for couple of years since THE beginNING OF THE mobile phones invention. Not only in appearance (it's smaller), but in 'employ'(usage, facilities,?) too.
Firstly ANYONE who has a mobile phone can 'be always keep' ALWAYS KEEP in touch all THE time, because thESE phones are wireless. When we have a situation, when
somebody needs 'to be helped' (mozna tez needs help), we can ring (kogo?).
The newest mobile phones serve not only for ringing but THEY haVE access to THE internet, THEY take photos etc.

In contrast it's not 'cultured' GOOD MANNERS when WE ARE in A public place TO HAVE THE telephone ringing. It's expensive to keep.
When we are talking THE phone is emitting radiation, so it's
A menace to 'live' LIFE (rzeczownik).

In conclusion, I want to express 'oneself'MY OWN THOUGHTS about mobile phones. I think that people need 'it' THEM (dlatego ze phones to l. mnoga), but within limits.
But ONLY WHEN it's needED in pressing situations or when somebody needs to be helped.