Czy moge prosić o sprawdzenie tych 10 zdań. ma to byc opis wakacji przy wykorzystaniu tylko Past Simple:
Będe wdzięczna za każda pomoc:
1. In August 2007 I had unusually holidays.
2. It was in karwica over lake Nidzkie - it is lovable place, only water and forest.
3. The first two days were nice - the weather was wonderful and i didn't see any cloud in the sky.
4. but one day the sky was strange, we saw dark clouds everywhere.
5. When it began drop, we sterted hide every our things to tent and then ourselves went into tent.
6. When already started real thunder-storm, we remembered about our dinghy.
7. Andrew and his father left tent and run to lake to save dinghy.
8. The wind was really strong, that's why other girls and I held our tent.
9. I laughed but this situation was very dangerous.
10. When e backed to home, we heard in radio that during thunder-storm were died twelve person.