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19.08
Yesterday I began a trip. I wanted to go sightseeing Australia. I sailed from my house in Europe by big ship. The weather wasn't great. Suddenly a terrible storm began. Evidently I passed out. When I woke up, i was in a beautifoul island. Alone! There wasn't whatsoever baggage.
20.08
When I woke up, I was hungry. Luckily there is very warm! I had only jeans and T-shirt. I wanted to find some food. Mercifully, there was a lot of palms with cocounts and bananas! Fortunately, there aren't fierce animals and cannibals.
21.08
I mustn't fall apart! I must live trough there. One day for cerfain an odd ship will waft there. Now, I have a time for relax. On raft, for certain I will never arrive Europa.To be honest I can do nothing. I am only sleepind and sunbathind.
17.08
At lenght! Today a ship stoped and captain admited me on deck. He can speak english. He take me to Europe. From the first I knew, that it will be happy end.




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Weronika
19.08
Yesterday I began a trip. I wanted to go sightseeing IN Australia. I
sailed from my house in Europe by A big ship.
'Evidently' (cos tutaj nie tak, moze ..It seems that) I passed out. When I woke
up, 'i' (a dlaczego 'i' mala litera?) was 'in' ON a 'beautifoul' (ortog) island.
There wasn't whatsoever baggage.... tego zdania to nawet nie rozumiem
>20.08
Luckily 'there' IT 'is' WAS very warm!
Mercifully, there was a lot of palms with 'cocounts' (ortog) and bananas! Fortunately, there 'aren't' (nie uzywaj tego slowa, napisz poprawnie) fierce animals and cannibals.
21.08
I must live 'trough' (ortog) 'there' (zle slowo - THIS). One day for 'cerfain' (ortg) an odd ship will 'waft' (ja wole ...sail past) there. Now, I have 'a' (po co to?) time 'for' TO relax. On A raft, for certain I will never arrive IN 'Europa' (a to po jakiemu?).
I am only 'sleepind' (ortog) and 'sunbathind' (ortog).
17.08
At 'lenght' (ortog - ale to nie jest zdanie)! Today a ship 'stoped' (ortog) and THE captain admited me on deck.
He 'take' (tutaj czas przeszly me to Europe. From the first I knew, that it
(will WOULD be A happy end.

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