BŁAGAM O SPRAWDZENIE!!

PROSZE O SPRAWDZENIE TEGO W MIARE DOKŁADNIE :)z góry dziękuje:

Dear Sir/Madame

I am writing to ask for more information about your house sale advertisement that i've already found in your mail-order catalogue.
I'm very much intrested in your apartment for sale in
Alwyne Road, Wimbledon. I'll very grateful if you give some news about this building. I'd like to know how many bus stations and shops are close to it, and how many beds, showers, mirrors are inside?
I also would like to get information on abilities that i can find in neighbourhood, especially cinemas, operas, pools and tennis courts.
I look forward to your reply.

Your faithfully
XYZ Man

chyba dobrze... znalazlam tam dwa bledy :"I'll very grateful..." dodaj "be" po "I'll", oraz na koncu zrob" I'm looking forward to your reply". Jesli chodzi o forme, to ja mistrzem nie jestem, ale wydaje sie dobra :-)

z tego co wiem to tak jest dobrze: I look forward to receiving your reply:)

YOURS FAITHFULLY:)na koncu...

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to enqire about your house sale advertisement that I've already found in your mail-order catalogue.
I'm very much intrested in your apartment for sale in
Alwyne Road, Wimbledon. I'll be very grateful if you could give me some details about this building. I'd like to know how many bus stations and shops are next to it, and how many beds, showers, mirrors are inside?
I also would like to get information about entertainment which I can find in neighbourhood, especially cinemas, operas, swimming pools and tennis courts.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours faithfully
XYZ Man
TAK POWINNO BYC DOBRZE:)

ja to samo poprawialam pare dni temu. Poszukaj w wyszukiwarce.

no to ta praca musiala byc w innych tematach;/trudno chcialam pomoc...