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Today young people experiment with drugs.
Some take drugs, because they want to run away from problems, others want to have fun during the party. However in every case taking drugs leads to the same outcome. Namely, to addiction. The present people are careful person dependent on drugs for criminals, therefore that in today's times a drug habit be associates from smashing right. Between notion the drug addict, and the criminal very often places the sign of equality. And yet drug addict, then person dependent on drugs, which we should help, and doesn't punish, putting to prison.

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Today (tylko today?) young people experiment with drugs.
>Some take drugs, because they want to run away from THEIR problems, others
>want to have fun during A party. However in every case (naprawde) taking drugs
>leads to the same outcome. Namely, to addiction. (The present people
>are careful person dependent on drugs for criminals..znowu nie rozumiem co to znaczy), therefore in
>today's times a drug habit (be associates from smashing right..co to ma znaczyc). SOCIETY OFTEN EQUATES DRUG ADDICTS WITH CRIMINALS. And yet THE drug addict, the person dependent on drugs which
>we should help, and NOT punish, ARE put IN prison.

Poczatek byl dobry, reszte jeszcze potrzebuje troche pracy.

mialo byc :
IS put in prison

Namely, to addiction.

To nie zdanie. Mogło być po przecinku po outcome
... the same outcome, that is/namely addiction.