Prośba o sprawdzenie listu

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Witam!

ProszÄ™ o sprawdzenie i poprawienie mojego listu.

Jako zadanie było napisać list do znajomego z Anglii, w którym:
- zapytać się co u niego i jak mu idzie w szkole,
- poinformować, że poznałem nową dziewczynę i opisać okoliczności poznania,
- opisać jak spędzamy wolny czas i o czym rozmawiamy,
- zaprosić znajomego do Polski i pozdrowić jego dziewczynę

A oto co napisałem:


Dear Tom!

Thanks a lot for your letter. I got it yesterday and I was really happy.

You must know I’m fine but how are you? How are you doing at school? I hope you are OK.
I have been very busy now. I got a new job and I have to work very hard. But I’m so happy because I got to know a beautiful girl. Her name is Sara and she is younger than me for the year. I met her in the first day in my new job. I invited her for a coffee and we talked long time. She is my girlfriend now and I love her.
In our free time we are going to the cinema, theatre or concert. We are talking very often about music because it’s our hobby.
I must already finish. I will be really happy if you could come to us to Poland.
Say hallo to your girlfriend.

Take care.

XYZ
- Her name is Sara and she is A YEAR YOUNGER THAN ME.
- I invited her for a coffee and we talked FOR A long time.
- In our free time we GO to the cinema, theatre or A concert.
- We TALK very often about music because it’s our hobby.
- I WOULD be really happy if you could come to us to Poland.
- Give my regards to your girlfriend.

Podoba mi się Twój list, mimo że popełniłeś kilka niewielkich błędów.
edytowany przez Adriatic: 18 wrz 2010
Dzięki za pomoc ;)

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