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Internet is it a good way for make a new friendship? Plusy i minusy zawierania znajomości internetowych.

We have many posibilities for contact with new people. The internet is a good way to contract a new acquitance. This issue has both lots of pluses or minuses. Nowadays, it is a common way of communication. Most people prefer sending e-mail rather than calling to the family or other people by phone. However, internet is not very safe and it does have certain drawbacks that people tend to forget about.
Probably the greatest advantage of meeting people in the Internet is that they may be helphul in our life. For instance, if you have a problem with essay or difficult exercise, they find some time for you. It is amazing, because they do not have some any money for help. Another plus is that you feel pleasure when you write with other people. It may be an fantastic experiment for you. The process, when we get to know a new acquaintance is often very interesting, fascinating and time- consuming thing. I think, that people, who we know with website will be our friends in reality life. We have lots of posibility to met them.
The major disadvantage of make a new friendships on the Internet is we do not know who discuss with us. We may found a rapists, murders, drug dealers or other criminals. We should be keep a safety. People in the Internet are very naive and careless. They should be more responsible and careful. An additional disadvantage, which especially young people mention, is the Internet is a kind of eletronic leash When they are discussing in the gg or other portal they forget about commonplaceness. They do not go out with house. They are closed in each other.
All things considered, it can seen that it is not easy to find a perfect solution concerning this aspect. Internet may be a good way for make a new friendship, but we should be very careful.

dziękuje Terii za wiarę, że dam radę;*
edytowany przez discordia: 24 kwi 2011
We have many posibilities for (tutaj trzeba 'making') contact with new people. The internet is a good way to contract a new 'acquitance' (ortog) ACQUAINTANCE.
Most people prefer sending AN e-mail rather than calling 'to' (niepotr) the family or other people by phone.
Probably the greatest advantage of meeting people 'in' ON the Internet is that they may be 'helphul' (ortog) in our life. For instance, if you have a problem with AN essay or A difficult exercise, they find some time for you. It is amazing, because they do not 'have' (tutaj napisz 'get') 'some' (niepotr) any money for help.
It may be 'an' A fantastic experiment for you.
I think, that people, whoM we know 'with' (tutaj FROM A) website will be our friends in 'reality' REAL life. We have lots of posibility to 'met' (ortog - tutaj MEET) them.
The major disadvantage of makING 'a' (nie dajemy przedimka przed l. mn) new friendships on the Internet is THAT we do not know who IS 'discuss' (napisz inne slowo, tutaj CONVERSING with us. We may 'found' FIND 'a' (niepotr) rapists, murderERs, drug dealers or other criminals. We should be 'keep a safety' (daj to inaczej...We should be careful about our safety). People 'in' ON the Internet are very naive and careless.
An additional disadvantage, which especially young people mention, is the Internet is a kind of 'eletronic' (ortog) leash. When they are discussing SOMETHING 'in' ON the 'gg' (napisz tutaj friendship or social') or other portal they forget about 'commonplaceness' (dziwne slowo-popraw). They do not go out OF 'with' THE house. They are closed 'in each other' (cos tu nie tak, moze ' They cannot keep away from each other and contact each other constantly).


posSibility,
posSibilities
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possibilities - nie zauwazylam
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