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One of the most attractive for young people places in Słupsk is the Motor Rock Pub. Is a pub near city centre, where every people can spend time. It is said to be really nice and interesting place. It’s visited by majority of young people from Słupsk and other cities.
It is a small and cosy pub. Everybody knows each other, but people, who are there first time, always are nicely entertained. There is also a small stage, so lots of local bands can play concerts there. In that pub people can listen only a hard music, like rock or metal. Everybody can come there , spend a really good time with friends and listen to hard music. In the Motor Rock Pub people can meet a lot of friends, who have the same interests and like the same kind of music.
To sum up , the Motor Rock Pub is the best place, which people liking hard music can visit in Słupsk. It is also one of the best place to spend free time. Live concerts are really attractive to people living here and for tourists. This is the place, where everybody wants to go often to because of good music and nice people.

One of the most attractive 'for young people places' (zla kol slow, najpierw places...) in Słupsk is the Motor Rock Pub. Is a pub near (przedimek) city centre, where every 'people' (zle slowo, tutaj 'person') can spend (ale co? czy robia to zamiast pracowac?) time. It is said to be (dalabym przedimek) really nice and interesting place. It’s visited by (przedimek) majority of young people from Słupsk and other cities.
Everybody knows each other, but people, who are there (tu brak 2 slowa) first time, 'always are' (zla kol slow) nicely entertained.
In that pub people can listen only 'a' (to jest niepotr, miales na mysli TO) hard music, like rock or metal.
To sum up , the Motor Rock Pub is the best place, which people 'liking' WHO LIKE hard music can visit in Słupsk. It is also one of the best placeS to spend free time. Live concerts are really attractive 'to' FOR people living here and for tourists.
dobrze 7/10

>>>Is a pub near (przedimek) city
Lepiej użyć egzystencjalnego 'there' is...

can spend (ale co? czy robia to zamiast pracowac?) time. -> nie rozumiem... free time? może być czy nie o to chodzi?

dobrze 7/10 -> oo :D a jak to jest ocenione? ;)

To zdanie mowi ze ponad 50% mlodych ludzi ze Slupsk i z innych miast chodzi do tej knajpy. Far fetched statement, I think.

Everybody can come there .... slyszalem ze tak mowia ale czy poprawne?

NIE.
Everybody can come here
Everybody can go there

albo samo
everybody can come

tak, mozna tez: everybody is welcome