sprawdzenie, krotkie, wybor obrazka

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If I were to choose, I would choose photo 1 for some reasons. Firstly, I can see a pretty girl, so I think that her photo attract students. Secondly, this photo is more colorful than photo two, so it turn my friend on arts classes.

Jesli miałabym wybierac to wybrałabym zdjęcie 1 z kilku powodów. Po pierwsze widzę ladna dziewczyne wiec mysle, ze jej zdjęcie przyciągnie uczniow. Po drugie to zdjęcie jest bardziej kolorowe niż zdj. 2, wiec to zachęci moich kolegów do zajęć.

for a few reasons
girl there
will attract
encourage my friends to attend

If I were to choose, I would choose photo 1 for a few reasons. Firstly, I can see a pretty girl there, so I think that her photo will attract students. Secondly, this photo is more colorful than photo two, so it encourage my friends to attend on arts classes.

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If I were to choose one of the pictures, I would go with Picture 1 for a few reasons. Firstly, I can see a pretty girl there, so I think that the picture would attract the students. Secondly, this picture is more colourful than Picture 2, so I guess it would encourage my friends to attend art classes.

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