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Nowadays people have more and more electricity devices in their homes. Hoovers, kettles, fridges make life easier and comfortable. However, having these things too many also can bring certain problems, about which a person might be not aware.

There is no denying that the increase of devices amount in people houses has many positive sides. There are no doubts that they safe person's time which is spend on chores. Apart from that, electricity devices may need less human effort. For example vacuuming does not seem to be as exhausting as sweeping. Last but not least, gadgets like smartphones, tablets often can help to forget about everyday life.

Although growing amount of devices seems to have only advantages, it does have also drawbacks. First of all, people throw away more and more electricity things, which waste increases pollution. Secondly, bad used devices may cause a fire. Usually houses with children are the most exposed. Furthermore person might spend to much time using its gadgets. As a result, its relations with other people become worse.

On summary, the increase of devices' amount in people homes has as many benefits as negative sides. Being a responsible and thoughtful person can reduce disadvantages and fulfill people lives.

Nowadays people have more and more 'electricity' (zle slowo, tutaj 'electrical') devices in their homes.
However, having 'these things too many' (zla kol slow) 'also can' (zla kol slow) bring certain problems, about which a person might 'be not' (zla kol slow - co ty robisz?) aware.

There is no denying that the increase 'of devices amount' (dlaczego przekreczasz kolejnosc slow w zdaniu - albo masz kiepski translator - chyba tak, albo nie masz pojecia jak sie formuluje ang. zdania - Przestan to robic, bo to mnie denerwuje) in people houses 'has' (dlaczego dajesz 'has' do 'devices - jedno jest l. poj a drugi l. mnoga - czy jeszcze nie rozpoznajesz roznicy?) many positive sides. There are no doubts that they 'safe' (zle slowo) (przedimek) person's time which is 'spend' (zle slowo) on chores. Apart from that, 'electricity' (popraw) devices may need less human effort.
Last but not least, gadgets like smartphones, tablets often can help to forget about everyday life ( jaki sposob, jak jakis mobile mi bebni caly czas w tramwaju, autobusie - jak to mozna uznac ze 'forgetting' jak mi to bebni).

Although (przedimek) growing amount of devices 'seems' (zle slowo) to have only advantages, it does have also drawbacks. First of all, people throw away more and more 'electricity' (popraw, 'electricity-to jest prad,) things, which 'waste increases pollution' (tego to nawet nie rozumiem). Secondly, 'bad' (zle slowo i zla czesc mowy) used devices may cause a fire.
Furthermore (przedimek) person might spend 'to' (zle slowo) much time using 'its' (nie rozumiem co to slowo tutaj robi - a person NIGDY Nie jest 'it') gadgets. As a result, 'its' (dlaczego o ludziach piszesz 'it'?) relations with other people become worse.

'On summary' (nie, to jest zle, napisz Summarizing), the increase of 'devices' amount' (po jakiemu to jest?) in people homes 'has' (popraw) as many benefits as negative sides. Being a responsible and thoughtful person can reduce disadvantages and fulfill people lives (we jaki sposob?)