Cześć! Prosiłabym, żebyście sprawdzili mi historię, którą napisałam na podstawie historyjki obrazkowej. Chodzi mi głównie o gramatykę oraz słownictwo ale gdyby to nie było problemem to proszę również o rozwinięcie niektórych zdań. Z góry dziękuję. :3
They met at a party. Ryan fancied Hannah. They danced together all night. The next day Ryan called to Hanna. He asked her if she would go with him to the park. Hanna agreed do this. They get on well with together. Later Ryan and Hanna met in the park. They were walking and were speaking for a long time. After a walk Ryan invited Hannah for a lunch to the restaurant. He was a nice, handsome and wonderful. Then Hannah fell in love with Ryan. They wanted to meet again and again. Some time later Hanna went out with Ryan. Unluckily Hanna started be jealous of Ryan, because his ex girlfriend wrote e-mail to him. Well Ryan and Hannah fell out and splited up but they really loved each other. They didn't speak a month. But Hanna cried and missed every night, well for two months they decided maked up and got back together. They were happy. Two years later Ryan and Hannah had a good relationship, so Ryan decided to do a surprise for Hannah and he bought a engagement ring. Later Ryan invited her to the elegant restaurant and Ryan got enganged to Hannah. She was surprised and delighted! In the end Hannah and Ryan got married in little church and they live long and happies.