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At present, unhealthy food is a big problem in the world, in particular, among the young people. The government suggest introducing a tax on unhealthy food trade. This idea has certainly both the advantages and the disadvantages. Let us consider several of them.
First of all, the tax of unhealthy products results in higher price of the chips or fizzy drinks may successfully discourage people from buying these products. The difference in price betwen the healthy and unhealthy food may be appropriate way to warn of junk food for children in the primary schools and nursery schools who often do not understand that these products are very harmful. Secondly, this solution can bring high profit for the governemnt. Last, but not least, the money can be used in order to promote healthy products.
On the other hand, many people believe that introducing this tax is a theft because they often can not afford their favourite products. What is more, it is generally agreed that it is better to convince people than force them to buy healthy products. Finally, as a result of this solution many people who deal with unhealthy food may go bankrupt and get into serious trouble.
To sum up, there is a need to consider this issue and think about the advantages and disadvantages of this idea. Without doubt, the tax on junk food is a very extreme way to change dietary habits of people but certainly efficient.
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On the other hand, many people believe that introducing this tax is a theft because they often can not afford their favourite products. What is more, it is generally agreed that it is better to convince people than force them to buy healthy products. Finally, as a result of this solution many people who deal with unhealthy food may go bankrupt and get into serious trouble.
To sum up, there is a need to consider this issue and think about the advantages and disadvantages of this idea. Without doubt, the tax on junk food is a very extreme way to change dietary habits of people but IT IS certainly efficient.

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