Prosze o spr!! SZKOŁA

Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów. I dopisanie jednego argumentu przeciw szkole plus jakieś ciekawe zakończenie.!!

Do we have to attend### # school? Many people ask # this question. Certainly attending # school give us many possibilites# but also disadvantages. First of all, going to school# give us knowledge which we can use in the future¸ because school prepare us for live. Beside this at school we get to know and meet many friends. We also can talk with them a lot. Last but not least is there, that in school we can talking in different topics together with the friends, teachers and we can mention views. However there are also disadventages of attending to school. Firstly, going to school requires a lot of time because we devote much time# to studying. Secondly, at school we sometimes feel threatened# because some of us can become an object of aggression. Finally,

Certainly attending A school giveS us many possibilites but also
MANY disadvantages. First of all, going to school giveS us knowledge which
we can use in the future¸ because A school prepareS us for 'live' (live to czasownik, tu potrzebujesz rzeczownika - LIFE). BesideS this at school we get to know and meet many friends. We 'also can' (zla kolejnosc - can also) talk
with them a lot. Last, but not least 'is there' (zla kolejnosc slow - there is the possibility that ...) in school we can 'talking' (TALK) ABOUT different topics together with 'the' (bez the) friends, teachers and we can 'mention' (moze lepiej discuss our) views. However there are also disadvAntages IN
attending 'to' (to niepotr) school. First, going to school requires a lot of time because we devote SO much time to studying. Secondly, at school we
sometimes feel threatened because some of us can become 'an object' (mozna an object of fun or of aggression). Finally, (there is the question of learning things which may not be very interesting)

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