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Czy ktoś mógłby mi z tym pomóc ? Jakie tu są błędy ?

Me and my friends were afraid of our neighbours. They had strange and incomprehensible rules. One day, when we were playing football on the grass, they went out from their house and shouted at us ! They said that children in Canada (they lived there for a few years) don`t go on the grass and that we had destroyed our beutiful nature. It was shocking for us. We didn`t know what to do.
Next time he took pictures of us and said he would call a police (because we were too loud) !
In the other time he told us about the country he used to live.
In our yard, they had nicknames which were connected with the serial we like the most. They were bad character. When we told about them we always used nicknames.

'Me and my friends' (ja lubie napisac My friends and I) were afraid of our neighbours.
..grass, they 'went' (tutaj lepiej 'came') out 'from' OF their house and shouted at us!
...don`t go on the grass and that we had destroyed our beAutiful nature.
..time he took pictures of us and said he would call 'a' THE police
'In the other' ANOTHER time he told us about...
In our yard, they had nicknames which were connected with the TV serial
we likeD the most.
They were bad character.(czy masz na mysli...they were bad characterS (lepiej napisac ..bad people).
When we 'told' (czy masz na mysli 'talked') about them we always used nicknames.