Prosze o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów

AdusiaNW 21 Paź 2007, 22:11 odpowiedz
Prosze o dokładne instrukcje gdzie co mam poprawić i co dopisać, bo ostatnio cięźko mi sie było połapać ;) z góry dziekuje



Dear Susan

I found a cat last week. I found it when I was walking in the park. I go to home from school. I took him home because he is beatiful, and It looked very sad.
My sister was really happy that we have a cat. Unfortunately, my parents don't like animal and they are not happy when I bring to home this cat. Now, when this cat live with us already nearly week, they got used to him and accept him presence in home.
The cat didn't want eat and he had some insects, so I took him to a veterinary surgeon and bought special collar and shampoo.
I must earlier because I must to give eat to him. I have to clean the him cage. That was because of him I have less free time but I am really happy that he have.

Take care.

XYZ

bardzo Was prosze. Zupełnie nie wiem jak mam to zrobić :(

Dear Susan,

I found a cat last week. I found it while I was walking in the park. I was going home from school. I took him home because he looked very said and he is beautiful.
My sister was really happy that we had a cat. Unfortunately, my parents don't like animals and they were not happy when I brought this cat home. Now that we have had this cat for nearly a week now, they got used to him and accept his presence in the home.
In the beginning, the cat didn't want to eat and had some insects so I took him to a veterinary surgeon and bought a special collar and shampoo. I have to get up and earlier because I have to give some food to him. I have to clean his cage. It is because of him that I have had less free time recently, but I'm really happy to have him.
Take care.
XYZ

dziekuje ;)