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I think that literary figure which I could make friend is Rodion Raskolnikov. He is the main character of the psychological novel written by Fiodor Dostojewski called "Crime and Punishment".
Rodion was 23 years old student with skinny posture and average height. He has got long, clean-shaven face, with a sarcastic smile. His eyes were blue and quite large, and nose- small and hooked. He's got thick lips and dark, short, curly hair. Rodion was wearing old, damaged hat and long, black, shabby coat.
Raskolnikov was all the time totally absent-minded and broody. He was recluse but I think, that he could be very intriguing person. Boy was mysterious and strong-willed so he is very interesting.
He could go out for all night and ramble in Saint Petersburg. He likes roses and psychological books. I think I could tell that he was very intelligent boy.
Sometimes I think that me and Rodion are similar, becouse we have reflection nature, and we have a lot in common. For that reasonwe will probably get on well with each other. I would also have someone I can realy trust, so I think, that Rodion would be an ideal friend.

I think that THE literary figure which I could make friend is Rodion
Raskolnikov. He is the main character of the psychological novel
written by 'Fiodor Dostojewski' (sprawdz jak piszemy to po ang.) called "Crime and Punishment".
Rodion was 'A' 23 years old student with skinny posture and average
height. He 'has' HAD (czas przeszly) 'got' (choc wg mnie niepotr) 'A' long, clean-shaven face, with a sarcastic smile.
His eyes were blue and quite large, and HIS nose WAS small and hooked. 'He's' (nie, HE HAD got thick lips and dark, short, curly hair. Rodion 'was wearing' WORE AN old, damaged hat and long, black, shabby coat.
Raskolnikov was 'all the time' ALWAYS totally absent-minded and broody. He was
'A' recluse but I think, that he could be 'A' very intriguing person. THE boy was mysterious and strong-willed 'so he is very' (lepiej WHICH MADE HIM VERY interesting.
He 'likes' LIKED roses and psychological books. I think I could tell that he was 'A' very intelligent boy.
Sometimes I think that 'me and Rodion' (jest przyjete, ze siebie dajemy na 2gim miejscu, tutaj Rodion and I) are similar, 'becouse' (nie, nie, nie - prosze przypomnij sobie jak to slowo sie pisze) we have A 'reflection' REFLECTIVE nature, and we have a lot in common. For that reason we 'will' WOULD
probably get on well with each other.

Ok dziękuje bardzo.