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Dear Sir,
I am writting about the recent article in your newspaper regarding the decision to build a new cinema complex in our town. I think this is an excellent idea which will have many advantages for our town.
Many people do not get the chance to watch a new film which was released. thanks to a new cinema complex everyone who lives in our town will can go to the cinema because it will be in the centre of our town. Furthermore, it will also give children and teenagers access to entertainment. All the parents prefer their children watch the film than hear that children are bored. Moreover, our cinema complex will be very modern so even people who do not live in our town will want to go to our cinema. It means that our town can earn a lot of money. Needless to say that the new cinema complex will be in an excellent location. It is in the centre of town, near the motorway. Consequently, it will be very easy to get to. What is more, many people who are out of work will can have a good work. The benefits of building a new cinema complex are obvious. I think everybody will support that idea because it relates each inhabitant of our town.
I hope that the building of the cinema complex will start as soon as possible.

I am 'writting' (ortog) about the recent article in your newspaper regarding
the decision to build a new cinema complex in our town.
Many people do not get the chance to watch a new film which 'was' HAD BEEN
released. Thanks to a new cinema complex everyone who lives in our
town 'will can' (to sa 2 modale-dlaczego obok siebie?) go to the cinema because it will be in the centre of our town.
All the parents prefer their children TO watch the film than hear that children are bored.
What is more, many people who are out of work 'will can' (popraw to) have a good work.
I think everybody will support that idea because it relates TO each inhabitant of our town.