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I got up at 8 o’clock in the morning last Sunday. It was verry sunny morning, therefore I felt good and I was full of vigour. After that, I made a breakfast for all my family with my two daughters Beata and Karolina. After breakfast I cleaned a house and then we went to the Głogów city. We left home at 12 o’clock a.m. My younger daughter Karolina had birthday therefore we celebrated that special day. We went to the McDonald’s. We ordered a birthday cake and ice-cream. A birthday cake looked wonderful. Karolina had a great time. We left the McDonald’s at 3 o’clock p.m. After that I and my husband wanted to take our daughters to the cinema. The „Lejdis” movie started at 6 o’clock p.m. therefore we had a lot of time, so we went for a walk in the park and the city. The walk was pleasurable becauce the weather was beatiful. The time passed verry quickly. My elder daughter Beata bought popcorn and pepsi before the movie start. We enjoyed the movie, expecially Karolina. The movie ended at 8 o’clock p.m. We came back home at 9 o’clock p.m. Altought we were tired, we found energies to look back on past day. We ate the supper at 10 o’clock p.m. and we had a long talk about that who had a great time. That day I went to sleep very late, at 12 o’clock p.m. I got to sleep verry quickly, but I and my family reminisced about that Sunday, especially Karolina. That day was full of the excitements and experiences. We spent an enjoyable day.

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