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My first day in Collegium Gostomianum

It was my first day in Collegium Gostomianum. I don't remember this day very well, but i can say that was a very special and excited day in my life. I was so nervous and my hands were still cold.
Everything began at 7 o'clock in the morning. I got up very early and I couldn't eat my breakfast, because my throat was close. I put my new white blouse and black skirt, they were very ellegant clothes. My mother couldn't drive me to school, so I must caught a bus.
When I was in Sandomierz, firstly I went to church. Later all students went to school. When I was going to the CG it seemed to me very big and terible. School was bigger, the halls were bigger even gym was bigger than in my gymnasium. School was full of unknown people! Students seemed too solemn for me. Everything was to scared for me.
We met in aula and headmaster made a speech. Later, headmaster schowed our classroom. I never saw this peolple, maybe I was too old for that feeling, but I scared. Our teacher told us about school and lessons, she was nice.
It wasn't a good day, because holiday ended and lessons began.
I don't remember this day very well, but ALL 'i' (a niby dlaczego 'i' jest napisane mala litera?) can say that IT was a very special and 'excited' (zla czesc zdania) day in my life. I was so nervous and my hands were 'still' (niepotr) cold.
...I couldn't eat my breakfast, because my throat was 'close' (nie, tutaj DRY). I put ON my new white blouse and black skirt, they were very 'ellegant' (ortog) clothes. My mother couldn't drive me to school, so I 'must' HAD TO 'caught' (tutaj czas teraz.) a bus.
Later all THE students went to school. When I was going to the CG it seemed to me TO BE very big and 'terible' (ortog). THE school was bigger, the halls were bigger even THE gym was bigger than in my gymnasium.
Everything was 'to scared' (zla czesc zdania, tutaj SCARY 'for' TO me.
We met in THE aula and THE headmaster made a speech. Later, THE headmaster 'schowed' (ortog) (ale komu? tutaj potrzeba US) our classroom. I never saw 'this' (ale przeciez people to l. mnoga - popraw) 'peolple' (ortog), maybe I was too old for that feeling, but I WAS scared. Our teacher told us about THE school and lessons, she was nice.
It wasn't a good day, because THE holiday HAD ended and THE lessons began.
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