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Proszę o sprawdzenie błędów.Potrzebuję to na jutro na uczelnie.Jest to list motywacyjny dotyczący wyjazdu na zagraniczną uczelnie, dlaczego chciałabym tam jechać.z góry dziękuje za szybki odzew i pomoc.


Letter of application


Dear Sir/Madam


I am writing to apply for the student at your University for one year in Direct Entry programme. At the moment I am in the second year of my studies.

I am intrested in studying at Birmingham University, because it create an opportunity to my professional and personal development. Study abroad allows me acquisite knowledge, which can be useful in the future. I will able to try other ways of learning.
Another thing is that study abroad is the more effective way to learn a foreign language. I have a good knowledge of English, but I think when I will be practise english every day I could master the language to almost perfection.

Period in the Birmingham University is for me the possibility to become independent, responsible, self-confident and definitely more mature, because I will encounter situations, which are absolutely new to me. It will be excellent possibility to adapt living abroad, discover new strengths and abilities, take on challenges, and solve problems. I am a person who takes on challenges. I am responsible and hard-working and this programme is opportunity to gain life experience and new abilities.

In my opinion study is a big chance to get to know other cultures and meeting new people and keeping in contact with them in the future. I would like to study abroad, because I can meet also other international students. This situation creates an excellent opportunity to build new and long-lasting friendships.

My experience of living and studying in a foreign country can give me profits in acquiring my dream job.


Yours faithfully,
XYZ

>I am writing to apply for 'the student' (to znaczy o ktorego studenta Ci tak dokladnie chodzi...to jest zle..powinno byc TO BE A student) at your University for one year 'in' (jabym dala UNDER) THE Direct Entry programme.

I am 'intrested' (ortog) in studying at Birmingham University, because it 'create' (a koncowka tego czasownika, dlaczego nie jest dostosowana do 3os.l.poj) an opportunity 'to' FOR my professional and personal development. Study abroad allows me TO 'acquisite' (zle slowo) knowledge, which can be useful in the future. I will BE able to try other ways of learning.
I have a good knowledge of English, but I think when 'I will be practise' (co to jest - zastanow sie i popraw) english every day I could master the language
to almost perfection.
THE period 'in' AT 'the' (niepotr) Birmingham University is for me the possibility to become independent, responsible, self-confident and definitely more mature, because I will encounter situations, which are absolutely new
to me. It will be AN excellent 'possibility' (zle slowo - daj inne) to adapt TO living abroad, discover new strengths and abilities, take on challenges, and solve problems.
I am responsible and hard-working and this programme is AN opportunity to gain life experience and new abilities.
In my opinion 'study' (pomysl o tym slowie i popraw) is a big chance to get to know other cultures and 'meeting' MEET new people and 'keeping'KEEP in contact with them in the future. I would like to study abroad, because I can 'meet also' (zla kol slow - also meet) other international students. This situation creates an excellent opportunity to build new and long-lasting friendships.
My experience of living and studying in a foreign country can give me
'profits' (zle slowo - to nie profit and loss account - popraw) in acquiring my dream job.