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How will a child feel when he opens his eyes in the year 2050? I think life will be very different then.
By the year 2050, pollution levels in cities will have decreased because scientists will have invented environmentally-friendly cars.
furthermore people live will have longer as scientists will have finded cures for many diseases.
Moreover by the year 2050 we will have gone on holiday to other planets because space will have traveled improve.
In addition we will have done more creative jobs as coputers will have done the most boring jobs.

On the other hand, there will be no more rainforests as we cut them all down.
Furthermore people will live in cities under the sea since normal cities become too crowded.
In addition more will increase as more people without work.

In conclusion whatever the future brings, I belive that children's lives will certainly be very different in the year 2050.

Zdanie By the year....jest dobrze, ale to dlatego, że pochodzi ono z planu wynikowego p. Kębłowskiej. W pozostałych zdaniach cos Ci się miesza ten future perfect.

furthermore people live will have longer as scientists will have
>finded cures for many diseases.

popraw "live will have longer".
find to czasownik nieregularny


>Moreover by the year 2050 we will have gone on holiday to other
>planets because space will have traveled improve

...because *space travel* will have...tu odpowiadnia forma czasownika improve.


>In addition we will have done more creative jobs as coputers will have
>done the most boring jobs.

lepiej użyc czasownika perform zamiast do


>
>On the other hand, there will be no more rainforests as we cut them
>all down.

W drugiej częsci zdania potrzab future perfect

>Furthermore people will live in cities under the sea since normal
>cities become too crowded.
tu też

"cities under the sea" = underwater cities

>In addition more will increase as more people without work.
To zdanie jest niezrozumiałe. Czego będzie więcej?

>In conclusion whatever the future brings, I belive that children's
>lives will certainly be very different in the year 2050.
literówka w "belive".

Musisz mieć tam wszędzie future perfect?

Niestety, ale muszę. Zdania miały być właśnie w tym czasie. Chodzi po prostu o to by było poprawnie gramatycznie.
Wielkie dzięki :))

"Zdanie By the year....jest dobrze, ale to dlatego, że pochodzi ono z planu wynikowego p. Kębłowskiej."
A tego nawet nie wiedziałam. Zdania są układane na podstawie książki 'Enterprise plus'

"On the other hand, there will be no more rainforests as we cut them all down.

W drugiej częsci zdania potrzab future perfect

Furthermore people will live in cities under the sea since normal cities become too crowded.
tu też"

On the other hand, there will be no more rainforests as we will have cut them all down.

Furthermore people will live in cities under the sea since normal cities will have cut them all down.

tak?

ojej. źle przepisałam:
'>>In addition more will increase as more people without work.
>To zdanie jest niezrozumiałe. Czego będzie więcej?'

'In addition more will poor people as there will have been fewer jobs.'
i
'Also crime will increase as more people will have without work.'

"On the other hand, there will be no more rainforests as we cut them all down.

W drugiej częsci zdania potrzab future perfect

Furthermore people will live in cities under the sea since normal cities become too crowded.
tu też"

On the other hand, there will be no more rainforests as we will have cut them all down.

Furthermore people will live in cities under the sea since normal cities will have become too crowded .

tak?

ojej. źle przepisałam:
'>>In addition more will increase as more people without work.
>To zdanie jest niezrozumiałe. Czego będzie więcej?'

'In addition more will poor people as there will have been fewer jobs.'
i
'Also crime will increase as more people will have without work.'