Poprawnie gramatycznie? Esej.

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My essay doesn’t begin with words "I would like to study on ...." It is too trivial.
So... I was born on 24 January, 1994yeras. At first I learned to speak, read and write. When I got to know world I knew what I wanted to do in the life For about 11 years I’m sure that I will be a lawyer and how will look like my future.
I would like to fight for justice not only in my country, but also around the world. I can do that while studying at one of the best universities - Oxford.
I would like to pass my knowledge to others people and with dignity to defend theirs rights.
My essay doesn't begin with PRZEDIMEK words "I would like to study on ...."

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