Czy to jest poprawnie?? Bardzo proszę o szybką odp

-Hi, Ann!! How are you?
-Fine. But I've got a headache, bacause here is very lougly.
-Hmm, I know. A cars go twenty-four seven...Hre is loudly and unpleasant.You have to move to countryside.In countryside is peaceful.
-Never! Iwon't my town.Here is many shops, night clubs and more...(Mam wszędzie blisko)
-Oh, yes.But your health is the most important! Not shops or night clubs...
-Maybe yes. I will think for it.
-Good.See you soon, bye!
-Bye!

>-Hi, Ann!! How are you?
>-I am fine. But I've got headache, bacause here is very loud.
>-Hmm, I know. Cars go twenty-four seven.There is loud and
>unpleasant here.You have to move to countryside.It is
>peaceful.
>-Never! I want my town.There are many shops and night clubs here.What is more it is close to everywhere.
>-Oh, yes.But your health is the most important thing! Not shops or night
>clubs...
>-Maybe yes. I will think about it.
>-Good.See you soon, bye!
>-Bye!

I've got a headache. bole sa policzalne :)

It is loud and unpleasent here. (it a nie there!)

You have to move to the countryside.

What is more, it is close to everywhere. (comma)

ps. co znaczy: "Cars go 24 7 ???"

>ps. co znaczy: "Cars go 24 7 ???"

Ruch uliczny 24 godz na dobe.

Jeszcze jeden blad tam byl. "I want my town" czy cos takiego.
Lepiej to zmien na "I want to live in the city".

thanks :)

thx wszystkim!!:)