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OUR LIFE – 50 YEARS FROM NOW

I shouldn’t be interested in this at all. I’ m sure that in 2061 I will have been dead.
But let’s review a matter.
So many wars are in the world. Some are finished, some begin and it will not change.
Danger of use the atomic bomb is really big.
It is possible, that North Korea will be trying to conquer the whole world.
Or some new, little off leader of country, who will have modern and groundbraking ideas.
Hunger will not have stopped.
We will be using up too much natural resources and we will not respect our planet.
It conduce to pollutions, acid rains, increment of ozone hole and green house effect.
Poisonous water basin, doomed species of animals, so lack of food and water.
By now people have unhealthy life style. In my opinion it will go worse.
Hurry, monotony and stress will be a cause of many mentally problems.
When I look ahead I see only pessimistic script.
Yeah… definitely I will not be living in 50 years’ time.
Cytat: srewka
OUR LIFE – 50 YEARS FROM NOW

I shouldn’t be interested in this at all. I’ m sure that in 2061 I will have been dead FUTURE SIMPLE, BO FUTURE PERFECT STOSUJE SIE Z 'BY 2061',I TRZEBA BY BYLO DODAC OD ILU LAT BEDZIESZ 'UMARTA'.
But let’s review THIS matter. (A MATTER - JAKAS SPRAWE)
So many wars are in the world.<-NAPISZ JESSCZE RAZ OD 'THERE ARE' Some are OVER, some begin PRESENT CONTINUOUS and THAT will not change.
THE Danger of use BRAK MALEGO SLOWA the atomic bomb is really big.
It is possible, BEZ PRZECINKA that North Korea will be trying to conquer the whole world.
Or some new, little off NIE ROZUMIEM? leader of country, who will have modern and groundbrEaking ideas. ALE TU NIE MA GLOWNEGO ORZECZENIA
Hunger will not have stopped.
We will be using up too much natural resources and we will not respect our planet.
It WILL GIVE RISE TO pollutions SKAD LICZBA MNOGA?, acid rains, increment UTWORZ OD SLOWA 'ENLARGE'of THE ozone hole and THE green house effect.
Poisonous water basin, doomed species of animals, so lack of food and water. ZNOWU BRAK CZASOWNIKOW
people ALREADY LEAD AN unhealthy life style NOW. In my opinion it will BECOME worse.
HASTE, monotony and stress will be THE cause of many mentally<TO NIE JEST PRZYMIOTNIK problems.
When I look ahead I see only A pessimistic SCENARIO (BO SCRIPT TO JEST CO NAPISANEGO)
Yeah… definitely I will not be ALIVE in 50 years’ time.
dzięuję bardzo i doceniam:)
z little off chodziło mi o szurniętego, postrzelonego
off-beat
Or some new, off-beat leader of country, who will have modern and groundbreaking ideas, may come to power.
Poisonous water basin, doomed species of animals will bring about lack of food and water.

Czy te 2 poprawione zdania mogą być?
są ok
dzięki jeszcze raz :)
miłego wieczoru
leader of A country
:-)
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