There has been a lot of discussion in the media about Sport. Although there are many
advantages of
taking up professionally Sport, there are also some disadvantages.
This is what I am going to discuss below.
The most important advantage of
taking up professionally Sport is that it is
money which we would
earn. If you practice hard and constantly,
you will be a famous Sportsman. A further advantage of practice Sport is small
expenses. People who will be
a great Athletes do not need a big money.
Besides,
many kids has been preparing to professionally Sport
in the childhood.
Sportsmen may do what they really love.
On the other hand,
taking up professionally Sport has also its drawbacks.
Many people are injured, a few categories of Sports are very dangerous, for example
ski jumping or car races. If anything goes wrong, they can lose everything they have
achieved thus far. Another disadvantage of advanced Sport
is a lack of time.
Sometimes young sportsmen have not friends because they need to train long hours if they
want to achieve success. ??
Last but not least argument is a big stress which follow Sportsman.
This is an important challenge for everybody.
All in all practice advanced Sport is a good thing for people who are ambitious
and clever, but they must really look
at a dangerous what it could be.
My opinion is that teenagers
will be practice hard if they are to be good Sportsmen
many kids has been - to wyrażenie z tego co wyczytałem na internecie jest stosowane ?
a big stress which follow Sportsman - duży stres który towarzyszy sportowcom
Poprawiłem to co wskazałeś, że jest źle(mam nadzieję, że jest teraz ok), mógłbyś sprawdzić??
Wiem, że robię banalne błędy ale zapisałem się na rozszerzony język bo to dodatkowe punkty jak dla mnie więc cały czas jeszcze ćwiczę. Chcę mieć minimum 40% i wierzę, że mi się uda :)
Z góry dziękuję za pomoc, pozdrawiam