Living in a constant hurry man is looking for connection with nature, choosing alternative forms of tourism in his spare time. ...(ja cos nie lubie tego zdania - nie wiem co do dokladnie dodaje do 'thesis'- ono jest za ogolne)
'One of the kinds of green tourism' (ale wczesniej nie napisales, co to jest 'green tourism - nie mozna pisac ...one of the kinds, jak jeszcze nie wiemuy co uznajesz za 'green tourism') is apiturism.
This 'Master’s' (niepotr) thesis 'entitled' (ja bym dala inne slowo, np 'concerns') "Honey and bee products as a tourist attraction of Kluczbork District ". IT ' confirms' (nie mozesz tego tutaj napisac, bo to jest 'conclusion' a to powinno byc na koncu) hypothesis that honey and bee products may be self-contained tourist attraction, especially in areas with a long tradition of beekeeping.
'For study an analysis of' (wg mnie niepotr) Documentation, direct interviews and questionnaire addressed to beekeepers of Kluczbork District, 'was' WERE used. This 'study shows that of' (nie za bardzo zgrabne zdanie) (mozna ...This study asserts that 'interest for' (niepotr) tourists are not only INTERESTED IN 'a' THE consumption of honey and bee products (przecinek przed 'but') but also the cycle of 'their' (nie wiem do czego to sie odnosi, lepiej napisz 'honey') production, ITS use in cuisine, medicine, cosmetics or apitherapy, and the work of the beekeeper as a 'profession with a long tradition' (poszukaj inne okreslenie).
(kto? co?) aim to obtain a broad knowledge of the apiary farms, their offerings and potential that could be used for apiturism has been achieved. (tego zdanie calkowicie nie rozumiem, jest za bardzo pokrecone)
'It' (nie, tutaj napisz The study) 'was successfully' (niepotr) established that 'at the discussed area' (to jest self-evident, niepotr) there is a large potential for tourism, high biodiversity, historical and 'kultural' (co to za slowo?) goods.
'Study have shown that in this place' n(niepotr, lepiej napisac.,..The district ofXXX) 'there are' (niepotr) HAS many long-standing medium-sized apiaries, and fledgling, small apifarms, indicating that interest in beekeeping 'still grows' (is increasing).
In this paper (kto? co?) proposes "Api-Wellness" as an interesting form of 'expand' (zle slowo) (cos brak) the current 'offer' (wczesniej o zadnej 'offer' nie pisales)
Nie rozumiem dokladnie co badales, to nie jest jasne.