Cytat: labtes
Such synonymous possibilities as are illustrated in XX are not equally acceptable.
Te are rzuciło mi się w oczy ponieważ ja bym je pominął. Czy popełniłbym błąd? Czy jest jakaś róznica?
You would be right.
Two fixes are possible here:
1. Drop "are" altogether, as you said, (and ad two commas), or
2. Replace "as" with an unquestionable relative pronoun "which/that,"
The problem with "as" in your sentence above is that your "as" is adverbial in character but it pretends to be a pronoun.
Secret: When "as" is used as a relative pronoun, its antecedent cannot be any noun that has already been explicitly articulated (and which must be referred to by an ordinary relative—
such as, which, that, who), but some idea inferred from the main sentence, e.g., some (verbal) notion, or previously unmentioned noun. The pronoun "as" seeks its antecedent by way of inferring rather than spotting,
Test: If a clear-cut pronoun does the job, "as" as a relative pronoun is out of place.