Bardzo prosze o sprawdznie poprawnosci zdan z mojego listu motywacyjnego:
1) czy to nie brzmi zbyt prosto? Szczegolnie zastanawia mnie "so far":
"Being satisfied with knowledge and experience I have gained so far, I have made a decision to direct my career path towards my second profession – Geodesy."
2) Ktora wersja byla by lepsza?
"Now I am looking to gain a Geophysicist position in Oil and Gas industry with development potential" / "Now I am seeking a Geophysicist position in Oil and Gas industry with development potential."
Bardzo prosze o pomoc.
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